Hi everyone,
Welcome to my first blog,
This is my second time to learn at Kasetsart University
This blog is created to share my life,my great experiences and my
lifetime journey.
If you love to learn more in the new things, please don’t hesitate
to follow my blog.
Sai ^^
It's nice to see something change from the first day you created this blog in class. That means you went back home and tried to work on it until you're satisfied with your performance. I'd like to see just a slightly change. Look carefully at this sentence.
ReplyDelete"Please call me "Sai" , Nice to have you to my readers." Can you see anything wrong?
Also look again at this sentence,"So, I will update my blog continuous, Please follow me in the next."
I'm waiting to see more post and what you would write in your class journal.
Thank you for your suggestion and I will chang it carefully. ^^
ReplyDeleteI love your new version. It's more interesting and you really wrote carefully. What a nice and attentive student! You may remove some comment if you want. I don't mind if you remove mine when you saw and really took action to respond to it.
ReplyDeleteThanks you for your suggestion again. I love your comments.^0^
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